I am Narcissus.
Born from the shadows of night.
The pale moon, the inky sky
beautify me.
My colour blooms
against the dark of the night.
Stranger, you may drown in my eyes
and never see them again.
My fragrant songs may bewitch you.
Beware! Walk not in this path
if you fear a thing to lose.
I take myself apart
part by part,sense by sense.
I examine their beauty,
caress their softness,
kiss the bruises away.
Then I tuck them back,
my broken parts,
join them by a feeble faith, a fickle faith.
Everybody loves this body
of a patched-up rag doll
but only in the dark of night.
I am a fairy
born in the absence of light.
Saturday, September 22, 2007
Narcissus
crazily rants The Mad Girl at 8:17 AM
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8 comments:
eesh! what lovely wordings.... ozzum!
'Then I tuck them back,
my broken parts,
joined by a feeble faith, a fickle faith.'
Hypnotic.
:)
a rag doll sometimes...a fairy at others
i quite like the lines
Hmm...hmmm, need to peep here now and then.
Anindya-da
FS, JU
My blog: Love’s Ragpicker Tales
Everybody loves this body
of a patched-up rag doll
but only in the dark of night.
I am a fairy
born in the absence of light
I love these lines! I think they r the best lines of this awesome creation of urs:)
U r an angel in broad daylight!:D
loved it!!
i second arunima...hypnotic
@man-thank you dear.
@anurima-sotyi? i have a feeling you didnt like it much.:(
@inihos-thanks:)
@anindya da-thank you so much.I feel honoured!!
@sree-thanks for everything darling.:)
@little boxes-thank you.u have great poems on ur blog as well.
luvvvv ur poems...
ps- i have chnged my name from darkling!!
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